Review Comment:
This manuscript was submitted as 'Survey Article' and should be reviewed along the following dimensions: (1) Suitability as introductory text, targeted at researchers, PhD students, or practitioners, to get started on the covered topic. (2) How comprehensive and how balanced is the presentation and coverage. (3) Readability and clarity of the presentation. (4) Importance of the covered material to the broader Semantic Web community.
This paper provides an evaluation and comparison of a set of ontologies for units of measure
that are currently in use in the Semantic Web.
Given the (surprising) plethora of such ontologies for units of measure, a paper such as this
is of critical importance for the field. Unfortunately, the authors fall short of this ambition.
The first part of the paper (Sections 1-4) provide only a superficial analysis and is
frustratingly short on details for a journal paper. This is especially the problem with Section 2,
where different approaches are briefly mentioned with a sentence or two of commentary.
The authors need to identify the key ideas that they want to use, and then focus on how these
ideas are being applied in the rest of the paper. In particular, it seems that Section 2 should
inform the methodology used by the authors in Section 4.
I don't see the point of the Wikipedia discussion halfway through Section 2.1.
It is not sufficiently connected to the rest of the paper.
I'm not sure about the purpose of Section 3. If it is simply a glossary, perhaps it is best to
appear as an Appendix. It is a poorly written section that consist of a series of Definitions
without any intervening text (even if these were formal definitions, which they are not).
Section 4 is muddled.
In Section 4.1, there is an odd mix of shallow metrics (number of individuals per concept)
and more significant ones (completeness of an ontology regarding certain relations between the individuals).
In some respects, the authors skip over some of the more interesting forms of evaluation,
such as the correctness of an ontology; ultimately, this kind of ontological analysis must be done.
A more serious problem arises with the following claim:
"In absence of such a reference corpus, we decided to use the union of all individuals used in the different available ontologies."
First, it is not clear what this notion of union means -- can it lead to inconsistencies?
Second, this alone does nothing to specify mappings, yet the authors seem to indicate in the next
paragraph that mappings among the ontologies are a byproduct of the union.
I cannot see how this can possibly be the case.
In Section 4.2, the authors state that
A strictly manual assessment of the given ontologies is quite cumbersome and oftentimes lacks the advantages of an automated, systematic approach.
but no convincing argument is given.
A similar problem arises a few paragraphs later:
Whereas for some concepts a mere comparison by name might be sufficient, others like the units themselves need a more sophisticated approach, which also takes the ordering of terms into account.
Exactly what do the authors have in mind here? Again, a frustrating lack of detail ...
In Section 5, the authors finally hit their stride, and the observations and results found
in this section are both interesting and significant. It is interesting to read how preliminary
results have already led to the revision of at least one of the ontologies being studied in the paper.
It would be more substantial to have a thorough ontological analysis, but regardless, the results
presented in this Section are eminently useful for ontology users and practitioners.
The benefits of this paper ultimately outweigh its flaws.
The paper should be accepted, albeit with major revisions to the first four sections.
Editorial Comments:
The paper is marred by numerous stylistic and grammatical errors that appear throughout the paper.
I have identified most of these below, but I suggest that any future version of this paper be given
to an editor who is a native English speaker.
Awkward Sentences:
Section 2.1:
However, the following subset of ontologies was selected, as they seem to be the most promising candidates regarding the amount of individuals and concepts modeled
Section 2.2
This analysis determined a lack of an ontology containing all important concepts of this domain.
Their approach requires relations between units themselves like, e.g., unit composition to be present in the ontologies, which unfortunately is not guaranteed for all ontologies.
Section 4.1
Although this probably does not reach the same quality level, it can serve as a well enough substitute
Section 5.1
Just looking for the ontology with the most units WD takes first place with almost as much units as all other ontologies combined.
A complete coverage in the discussed way is rarely achieved by any ontology.
Section 5.3
QUDT, which is also one of the medium sized ontologies, contained the following issues: Most important, the ontology is inconsistent.
The first two paragraphs of Section 6 need to be rewritten.
Stylistic Problems:
In Section 2.1, there is the following one sentence paragraph:
Besides these specialized domain ontologies, linked data initiatives also provide data on units of measurement.
At the end of Section 2.1, there is the following hanging sentence:
– Wikidata (WD); community driven repository of factual data for Wikipedia12
The third paragraph of Section 2.2 has conflicting tenses,
as does the first paragraph of Section 5.
Typos
Section 4.1:
One is coverage, which evolves around what concepts are modeled as well as how many and what kind of individuals are included.
evolves --> revolves
In absence of such a reference corpus,
- should be "the absence ..."
Section 5.1
Also notable is the fact that there seems to be little consent which units are essential to an ontology
consent --> consensus?
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